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Can true love really happen?She dances,
Delicately around him.
Engulfing him in flames of affection.
He is falling,
Falling slowly for her.
AS she smiles and focuses only on him,
He only focuses on her.
Fireworks engulf them as they fall,
Fall only for each other.
He falls for her,
And she falls for him.
Months later and they are still forever together,
She is the dancer,
And he,
The joker.





Silver Tongued MysteriesThat night, when your lips tasted of butterflies,
I discovered supernovae in your eyes.
Your gossamer lashes brush against my skin
and my heart soars like symphonic violins --
but your apocryphal words cloud in my mind
as I realize for so long I have been blind.
I am a panther caged in your desire; weak,
filled with an apathy that makes my bones creak.
The roots connecting me to earth are brittle
as burned wood, a pain that throbs inside my skull.
That night, when your lips tasted of butterflies,
I discovered supernovae in your eyes.
Your gossamer lashes brush against my skin
and my heart soars like symphonic violins.
The sky-trees sing of ignorance in beauty,
telling stories within their aging rings, free.
Their voices twine together in the east wind
and make their way to me, though my eyes are dimmed,
all the way across the ocean. I struggle
away from the abyss that seems so chasmal
while pressing my footprints into silver sand;
trying to leave a permanent mark here, and
that night,


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Hello everyone, I know some of you might be tired of reading my essay. But this will be my last essay of the school year. If you have some free time, please help me edit my last essay of the year. I really hope I can make a A+ in this essay so I can have a B in my English class.

This is a write any you want essay, I can make up any thing I want. Must be in third person. All of the grade come from grammar, I try my best and get help from other people but I still got a lot of points count off for my grammar in my last two essay.

So, please help me get more people to edit my essay. The more the better for me.

Update note: 
I want to start off by saying thank you so much for the edit and your time. I am greatly appreciated. Now I have a newer version, there will be a lot less mistakes. But, I still want someone to prove read over it one more time please. My English teacher want perfection, she check on smallest details on grammar.  This will be my last grade in the class. 



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                            People Should Learn How to Fly Like a Bird

    At first thought, flying is not a fun thing to do. When someone flies during the winter time it’s going to be cold, or a bird might run into a person’s face if they are not paying attention to where they is going. However, at a second glance flying is a great ability to learn because it saves time, it keeps a person healthy and it’s safe.

    First of all, learning how to fly can save a person a large amount of time, which is one of the reasons why people should learn how to fly like a bird. Dr. Cheese Cake, former chief member of the time saving department in Dallas, Texas, said “Flying is a great ability to learn because a person can travel up to 35 miles per hour compare to an average human walking speed of 3.1 miles per hour.” In addition to speed, Dr. Mcdonald Menu, chief member of time management in Manhattan, New York, has found that if a person flies more than 3 hours a day, that person will be faster at tasks such as cooking, cleaning, studying and reading than those who don’t fly at all.

    Secondly, flying will keep a person healthy for their entire life, and that also proves why people should learn how to fly like a bird. Little Bunny, a civilian living in New York that flies to work every day, has never had a health problem since the first day Mr. Bunny started flying to work in 1999. In addition to Little Bunny, Jackie North, learned how to fly when he was two years old, and now he is ninety-nine. He is recorded in the Guinness World Records as the healthiest person alive.

    Finally, The Accident Department of America can prove that people should learn to fly like a bird. Dr. Jack Joke, chief member of Accident Department of America, has received zero reported accidents for those who were flying during the last three years. However, there have been more than nine-thousand car accidents reported during the last three years according to Dr. Aaron Exit, member of Accident Department of America.  

    It saves time, it keeps a person healthy and because it’s safe proves that people should learn how to fly like a bird. So, obviously, flying is a great thing to learn. 

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AkikoSkills Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017  Student Writer
I would be very grateful if you would add some more folders so that we can keep submitting our art :) (Smile) 
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Um hello are you going to add anymore folders for us? :) I would love to submit more of my stories!
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Um, the folders are too full to submit any more art.
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Greetings! Your folders are full..
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Th-Thank you for the accepts...! =OoO= (*Bow) I-I really appreciate it...
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EwokPoet Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hi, I only now noticed that a chapter of my story is in your group and...well, I will have a look around. :)
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Good day. I wish to extend this invitation to all those who watched me through all these years. As a thanks for all your DevWatches, views, commissions, trades and requests, I wish to invite you my newly-made group site, based on the ongoing universe that I created through pictures and stories. This invite is to join, participate in, or simply view my group site dedicated to my ongoing fantasy novels, ‘Upon a Star’. If you are interested, check it out here at medierth.deviantart.com

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Wohoo thank you for accepting me! :3
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Thanks for accepting my story's first chapter! I really appreciate it~
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And thanks for another accept~! =^o^=
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